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Writer's pictureNeil Nagwekar

Modernity | TINTA Poems #11


48. Modernity – Part I


Lost among the landmine of woods

That sigh and groan like haunted homes—

Yet the forest seems by me spooked

As if sensing the bitter ends of my means—

I trespass, deeper and deeper,

My soda aura casting aside

The birds, the dolphins, the nightingales

Even the snakes and reptiles.


As I delve into duller glades

Into duller thickets and blacker lakes

Passing hermits who watch me with wet eyes

And worn men that return from the site

I ask them if I head the right way.

“Ten leagues yonder,” they all say

And as they trudge past, in my ears I hear

The rattles and clangs of hollowed-out minds.


I march on, shrugging aside their pleas

For I am hungry, hungry for my quarry

Hungry for that heart of darkness

That swamp of unnaturality

Where no sun rays are allowed inside—

Hidden in the visage of verdant greens

That humankind has longed to find.


49. Modernity – Part II


Sirens hang like stalactites and stalagmites

Adorning the yawning cavern—

The teeth and jaws of Modernity.


They dance like grapevines in the wind

They flicker at me sweet nothings

While from the blackness of the Cave

Wafts metal music, moans and yummy scents

Inviting me in.


I must admit,

Not once did I dither.

Not once did I think that ascetics

And addle-headed hollow men

Knew the truth of it better.

Not once did I begin to hesitate.


I dropped my lyre, my book of poetry

Plunged right inside the blackness

Dived straight into the deluge

Wonderland where all wonder was moot

And drank in the gadgets, the games

The songs that sounded like each other

The craft beers and porn stars

And friends that shared similar interests

But secretly wished me dead.


I betrothed myself to Nike shoes

And necklaces that adorned my day

And fucked women till they were objects

And Ubered everything to my cave

And mocked men who wistfully sighed

After the idle pleasures of the woods.

“The crevices of the Cave are lost to you!”

I boomed, consuming my Big Mac

And quenching my thirst with a Coke.


50. Modernity – Part III


Like forlorn fumes of ash and smoke

That flee from raging flames—never the same

As the light that granted it heat and life

Yet now banishes its poor copy out of sight

Like the gutter exiled from the river Thames

I stand, superficial, stoic and bland

Aged before my age

By pressures of hipster culture

Catching up to movies that matter

Rubbing sandpaper over my traits

And networking with those I dearly hate

Whilst latching on to tired trades.


I remember I once played the flute

(Or was it a lyre?)

During the Age of Unprocessed Food.


I remember the thresholds of my desires

Simmering and fulfilling from within—

Not from thumbs, hearts, swipes, shares

Anxiety pills with low side-effects

Or the latest Android update.

I lived longer and lesser in the Cave

Till discounts on things cost me ash and smoke

Till conversations turned to what we knew

What we did, and what we shall do


And we ceased to mean our how-do-you-do’s

And shared cards of shrinks instead of our ears

And binged at bars to tolerate the years

Stimulus everywhere – data of all kinds –

Cramming the mind with depression and delight –

“Did you see her Story of seven minutes ago?” –


Just Do It! – crap, no bargain on the C-type –

Christmas Eve with the mistress and moonshine –

There goes the economy again! – oh… like, you know –

Maybe this President will save the state –

Dollar an hour, Disneyland for a quick break –

Stamping over rats in the rat race –


“Not what I mean, that is not what I mean” –

McGriddles sells more than the Cheese Supreme –

“Could I have French fries with Oreo milkshake?” –


Centuries after, I stagger to safety

Bumping into explorers along the way.

“Ten leagues yonder,” I tell them kindly:

Mind hollowed, yet heart beginning to brim

For there is none now but I, my feet that roam

And tumultuous woods that feel like home.

 

P.S. I hid behind the moniker of TINTA since the account was opened on Instagram. Truth be told, this has always been my natural impulse. If I had my way, none of my works would be attributed to me. I write a lot of miserable stuff, which I don’t want attributed to my character. I am proud of my writing, but it is also comfortably the worst of me—where my most cynical, nihilist and antisocial tendencies come to fruit.


For a while, I hoped I could hide behind TINTA forever. Perhaps anonymity is cowardice, but it has always been my impulse. But people tell me there’s nothing sustainable about the moniker strategy—that I must put my name, centralize my content, ensure I take credit for everything in a brutal industry, blah blah blah.


So, briefly, let me introduce myself: I am Neil Nagwekar from Mumbai, India.


I don’t plan on abandoning the moniker TINTA though. Because there is a story behind TINTA, and I think it will take quite some time for it to be completed.


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