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Writer's pictureNeil Nagwekar

TINTA Poems #17


72. Hollowing


Dark Souls is a Video Game

Video Game, Video Game

Dark Souls is a Video Ga—

Don’t you dare go hollow.


The sizzle of half-white smoke

Lava that feels like lukewarm fire

Discoloured yet drinking water

Pink flesh paled by toxins

A scalp littered with bored lice

And hair that grows on it like fungus-moss

Balding, but not fully bald…


…a cake with French-imported cream

That tastes like old socks,

A funny joke told unfunnily

Laughter like rattling, clanging soda cans

Fretful four hours of sleep

And half-hearted clutching at

The years of life slipping by

Slipping… slipping…

Slipping… but still tickling numb fingers…


This is hollowing.

Hollowing is not permadeath.

Hollowing is halfness and numbness.

It is the bad ending of the game

You nonetheless completed.

It is the essence of a depleted man

Who thought, ten years past,

That he could be a Navy’s captain

And raise his mast with a lion’s pride

But today, scrubs the starboard

And washes the toilets

Of a lousy little cruise ship

(Like a cub with clipped nails)—

And bails his mind from reality

By believing he is living the dream.


Hollowing is refusing to meet loved ones

Because “I’m busy”, while

Idly scrolling YouTube Shorts.

Hollowing is the false fact that

There’s naught more to life but

SparkNoting instead of reading,

Blaming biology for big bones

And temper tantrums,

Finishing the MBA course you hated

(With distinction)

Or marrying someone you halfway tolerate

While ghosting the guy

Who made you feel something real.

It is Swiggying instead of cooking a meal,

Swapping sex with porn,

And, eventually,

Breathing your last in the same four-poster

You were born in,

While deluding yourself into thinking

That you explored all angles of life—

That the sorry parodies for reality

Which filled your entire waking hours

Was the whole point of life.


Spoiler alert: it was not.


Whether you are cold, fury-filled,

Passionate or mellow,

Don’t you dare go hollow!

For the sake of Satan, Shiva, Science

(Or whoever you call your god)

I beg thee,

Stop folding when you can gamble!

Don’t amble in the same streets!

Stop abstaining from sweetmeats!

Generate new regrets!

Be saved by different friends!

Try to make amends!

And shatter your comfort zone

Not with hesitation—

Not with a moan or a groan—

But with conviction that will

Make others freeze in their bones,

No matter how hot the weather.


Whether you lead or you follow

My advice on not being hollow

Is down to your decree.

But prithee, be careful,

And may the flames guide thee.


73. Adulting


Grenades fall. Sands rise.

A wingless cricket howls—

Soon devoured by a cat that prowls.

Beasts eat beasts. Man eats the wild.

The wild eats man. Man eats man.

Fights are dealt by force, fraud

Blood or kind—

This is not the state of the world:

This is the state of my mind.


I shovel aside the sand like Sisyphus

Chuck out the grain of grenade

Place the cricket on a ledge

Play fetch with the hissing cat

And thus retch out the vats of my brain.


But all that pain of diary-entries

And grumbling at shrinks

And forcing to think positively

Is a waste,

For the sand rises come morn.

New nades, new crickets and cats

And eternal man-upon-wild-upon-man

Resumes.


Alas, even to unwind is to rewind.

This is not the state of the world:

This is the state of my mind.


74. Furniture


*Thwack*

The last of the nails are hammered!

Now slurp shall I from apathy seas

Enamoured—

For the femme is frozen in plastic!

Her tics, tricks, toxic, terrible things

Which poisoned once-quixotic dreams

To conjure despair so unique, so exotic

Are dead, salvaged by eight pegs—

Watered wine with her dregs—

And this dull chair with four legs.


But soft! Furniture rumbles!

Out pop the nails, soaring to the ceiling

Tumbling down like metal rain!

Frowns form on the ridge

Timber melts like molten mercury

And lips smack, redder than a Howler:


“Craven!

You stood askance, slouch-kneed

To weak-kneed pleads for romance!

Turned inward like Eliot, quoth

Quixote but caged me for

Sancho, and Mused wealthy

While making whore of your deity?


“Forgive me, torn time,

Forgive me, lost petals!

You loved me when you learned I love you

Love me when it doesn’t bore you

Love me when it’s time for a wank

Then turn tail when I turn wise to the act!


“Deride my fruits of deep penance

Make mock of my independence

Then frame me femme – craft me as chair

To not taint your lair of pithy,

Masculine conscience?


Turn me human again!

Face me with wit and honesty—"


*Thwack*

She must be silenced

*Thwack*

To end mental violence

*Thwack*

Again, again

Hope for a-gain

*Thwack* *Thwack*

*Thwack*


75. Conversation Wars


I cling to my glass, my wits

As well as the eyes of all the table.

They sit hunchbacked, alert, askance,

(One or two batting a flirty eyelid)

Eyeing my tongue as I lick my lips

And drinking the dews of my flowing words

As if ’twere honey, something holy

Or some haltless homily—

For I was winning the Conversation War.


Conversation Wars are a deathly dance

Some claim it avarice, others an art

But while in trance, I call it mastery

Mastery over that universal impulse—

The desire to be heard;

The pressure to always be funny.


Only those in the trance can see the glory

In speaking with such surety about life

Or societies or hard-scenes or parties

Or the state-of-our-nation or the

Best sunset points near our location

Or clarifying what blockchains are all about

And have the words flow like the Ganges—

Be they about bliss or the abyss.


As none dared interrupt my sermon

Even when anecdotes turned to truisms

And truisms became half-truths,

’Twas then when it struck me:

The aim of life is not that dream job

Not therapy to fix our moth-eaten minds

Nor forging lifelong relations—

The aim of life is winning at conversations.


 

P.S. I hid behind the moniker of TINTA since the account was opened on Instagram. Truth be told, this has always been my natural impulse. If I had my way, none of my works would be attributed to me. I write a lot of miserable stuff, which I don’t want attributed to my character. I am proud of my writing, but it is also comfortably the worst of me—where my most cynical, nihilist and antisocial tendencies come to fruit.


For a while, I hoped I could hide behind TINTA forever. Perhaps anonymity is cowardice, but it has always been my impulse. But people tell me there’s nothing sustainable about the moniker strategy—that I must put my name, centralize my content, ensure I take credit for everything in a brutal industry, blah blah blah.


So, briefly, let me introduce myself: I am Neil Nagwekar from Mumbai, India.


I don’t plan on abandoning the moniker TINTA though. Because there is a story behind TINTA, and I think it will take quite some time for it to be completed.


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