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Writer's pictureNeil Nagwekar

Worn Man | TINTA Poems #16


67. Worn Man - Part I


He sat slumped, muddled in life and dreams,

Muttering to himself strange spells

That reigned over his words and deeds.


Clutching his sceptre like a cane,

From blackened bushes of white brows

Shone his eyes like striking violets—

Which, an eternity past, once glittered

From mirth, mischief to magic,

Betraying nothing but a trust that did not rust,

Turning stronger than steel when reimbursed.

A sight with sureness transcending

Beyond his gaze, capturing the wills

Of his well-wishers, turning allies

Of savages and rakes.

Eyes that drew words without speech

For they were forged in reassuring ease

Like the oiled sword drawn from the brass sheath.


But now they darted around

Like parrots in a cage,

Bouncing from sleek marbled floors

To doors, tall walls and pillars

He had helped create—monuments to his name

That madness made him forget.

Haggard, reddened with no sleep nor sanity

Did they flutter between vicars, rectors,

Public servants, friends and family.


68. Worn Man - Part II


When ministers in misery caught sight of his sight,

They found eyes fettered in hate; of a worn man

Bound in the chains of oblivion, simmering

Only in slippery rage, condemned

To eternal, decaying despair.

But for a second those eyes of fury seemed to see,

And their king yelled, “Edward! Easten!” in voice

Of remembrance, sense and glee.

Gushing came back the sights, the deeds,

The happy memories!


They saw the chiselled rocks, the jewels and halls,

Arched windows guarded by smiling sentries!

Legendary swords propped upon walls,

And a score of loyal subjects

Clustered around like eager bees!

And, for a second, Easten knew he knew

That his kingdom was truly one

Like fingers of a fist, like soldiers under siege—

He saw the blood, the sweat and the honesty

From which germinated with gradual finesse

An unity from ashes and lost lands,

Thriving like Ithaca, or like Baghdad!


Ah, those days of blood and glory—

When we had naught to our name

Spare our wits and industry!

When cattle and keeps trembled at our sight,

And warriors in fright impaled themselves

Before daring to point their swords

In the path of our might!

When warships rose like krakens from the sea,

Thundering through lightning, devouring

Schemes and foes with effortless mastery!

When all words, similes and philosophies

In the world failed the finest bards of our time,

Who could not picture the scope of our glory

Without seeming it like mere myth or fantasy!


69. Worn Man - Part III


In those brief periods of lucidity,

Did Easten deduce a wonderment, a happiness—

A thought trying to be free—

Before madness roped it into her arms;

Keeping him prisoner to brutish scars.


His king never knew that that brief moment

Of repose would be overcome by the black hole

Before he found time to flee;

Like the sudden tsunami swallowing the serene sea.


For not days after the end of our quests

Did insanity charge at him from the vanguard,

Caught us unguarded, and assaulted with success

Our saviour’s mind and heart.

His soul had died, yet the flesh survived,

Mocking his memory like poor parody.

Madness unmanned him, and him unmade—

A thorn without petals, a shell without meat

Was all that remained.


The night was once near; now it was here.

The subjects had mourned this night for weeks.

The night of trimming hedges, of planning losses—

Like the mariner scheduling the slay

Of the albatross—

As if marking dates on calendars

Would fashion order from chaos.

They looked on to Easten, chosen to do the deed,

Their stares of sorrow mingled with a silent plea.


70. Worn Man - Part IV


When white wisps escaped his stammering lips,

Did Easten find solace by suppression

Of his spirits, his souvenirs, his morals.

He poisoned his mind with lies that he did not care,

That this was fair, that the land came first;

Not its ruler, nor its heir.

‘Reminiscence is ignorance,’ mooted he,

Before he bit his lip bloody

In determined agony.

“No point in delay,” at last said he,

In tones as if he planned for Christmas Eve

Before walking across the hall, cutlass in hand

Toward the patron of his land, and his dear lord.


As a thunderous crack from yonder rung

And omens began their nightly howlings,

Easten grabbed him by the garb

Before he was aware of any misgivings.

He meant it to be gentle, but he knew

That the old chap could not see it so.

“Judas! Judas!” screeched he, lucid or mad,

Mouth spitting flame, and eyes transfixed in terror

At the actions of his most prized counsellor.

The hand that guided was now the hand that slapped,

Frailly; flopping, flailing against failure

Of escaping his friend’s soothing, yet firm force.


Clattered the crown that covered his bald pate

As, yanked from his seat by his crying minister

And dragged across the hall he built

Was he,


While his court, still as a corpse, filled with those

Who loved him more than most

Wept for his body and for his soul,

And followed him to his last journey.

He, for whom boys turned commanders;

Who became part of all he met

And elevated their lives from evanescence.

Who fought his whole life for them

As raider, leader and conqueror;

All for fruits he could not savour.


71. Worn Man - Part V


Out in the rain, came and walked they

Easten and his king leading the way.

“Horror! Horror!” kept yelling he,

Until he saw the fallen oak tree

Upon which throats of sinners, senile men

And those who attempted escape of arrest

Were put down to their final rest.


And, in that moment, he saw his sentence

In calm, solace and serenity.

He knelt to his knell voluntarily,

Reminding the subjects, the servants

And the bards, stood in sombre silence,

Before he bade them to part,

Of the fortitude inseparable to his heart.

He clung to his sceptre till he bled through his nails,

And only let go when down descended the swishing blade

From Easten—his mate, his bard; ever so kind—

Who chopped asunder his imprisoned mind.

 

P.S. I hid behind the moniker of TINTA since the account was opened on Instagram. Truth be told, this has always been my natural impulse. If I had my way, none of my works would be attributed to me. I write a lot of miserable stuff, which I don’t want attributed to my character. I am proud of my writing, but it is also comfortably the worst of me—where my most cynical, nihilist and antisocial tendencies come to fruit.


For a while, I hoped I could hide behind TINTA forever. Perhaps anonymity is cowardice, but it has always been my impulse. But people tell me there’s nothing sustainable about the moniker strategy—that I must put my name, centralize my content, ensure I take credit for everything in a brutal industry, blah blah blah.


So, briefly, let me introduce myself: I am Neil Nagwekar from Mumbai, India.


I don’t plan on abandoning the moniker TINTA though. Because there is a story behind TINTA, and I think it will take quite some time for it to be completed.


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